In relation to both my triangulation and image analysis essay in figures 1 and 2 I've received feedback on how to develop. Consequently additional proof reading is needed in order to correct minor spelling and grammatical errors. Furthermore additional references are needed in order to support and develop triangulation and image analysis essays further. However this is a good use of structure and triangulation within the first essay it just needs further refinement and development which will come with the inclusion of more references. In relation to the second essay additional references will help develop the analysis to avoid a repetitive tone which currently features within the essay.
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